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The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX:

What do you rate this story 1 as bad 5 as ok or 10 as amazing

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1 The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:32 am

dudey_x

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RABBIT

Chapter One


There was this animal that tried to kill a rabbit! But the rabbit was too fast and jumped down the hole into its burrow. But he seen his wife dead with all the baby rabbits behind her crying!!!!!!!!!

But then he found out that was a mechanical rabbit and his wife was down through the tunnel and up in the living room watching carrot T.V!! He wasnít very happy though as she hadnít made dinner and he had to miss his so the kids wouldnít starve to death!

He went straight to sleep after the kids went to bed as he was so hungry and tired from the day and hoped the day ahead of him would shed some light on him!!!

max

Chapter Two


The next day he woke up and went to the cellar to get a few carrots and mashed them into carrot porridge. He really enjoyed it as he hadnít eaten for nearly two whole days! (Do you think you could last two whole days without food?)

Anyway after he finished his extra delicious Carrot Porridge he went to to work over at the far end of his burrow were he wasmaking a new tunnel!! But when he got there the tunnel was already finished Surprised . He was gob smacked Exclamation Then his four children and wife hopped out of the tunnel shouting suprise Surprised ! Rabbit was wondering how they got there when he seen them in bed!! So the youngest of thr four explained that the tunnel would of collapsed if it didnt split in a certian area. Plus it happened to be next to the bedrooms so that were it split!!

Rabbit: (mouth wide open) Oh my lovely family, is that why you didnt cook dear?

Cresell: (Happy, Very Happy) Yes dear and that is why the children faked i was dead so we had the time needed to finish!!

All Four Children: (Excited) Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, [i]are you happy?

[b]Rabbit: Im very happy!!


Chapter 3 (you asked for it ss.tom)


Five years later old rabbit hopped out and seen his tunnel collapsed!!! He and the family was the sadist family and animal in the whole kingdom of Vervena and the king of this beautiful land felt it affraid . So he sent his toughest men to search and kill those animals so his kingdom could keep it's reputation of being the happiest kingdom in all of the north hemisphere!!

Old rabbit new they would be killed and went on the run all the way down to the south hemisphere!! Then he became king of a kingdom know as the Great Kingdom of Omoshui!! He started defeating other kingdoms and rapidly becoming more powerful!! Soon he was the king and conquer of all the south hemisphere and all except one of the north hemisphere. It was the kingdom Vervena and rabbit sent his strongest soldiers to destroy and conquer th great kingdom!! king pirat



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2 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:59 pm

Sneezerbug

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Wow. Shocked
U writed this?
It is very good.

3 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:02 pm

dudey_x

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I did and that the only 2 chapters unless u ask for more

4 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:06 pm

Sneezerbug

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Sell it.
Make a book.
Publish it.

5 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:07 pm

dudey_x

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how?

6 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:26 pm

Sneezerbug

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Go to the publishers.
Even children can do it.
U know Jacqueline Wilson?
She published her first book at the age of 9.

7 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:46 pm

dudey_x

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Wow Fansinating

Yeah But my books rubish

I was bored and write it
Nothing much

8 WELL ERM? on Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:33 pm

ss.tom


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Do another 2 chapters

9 Re: The Rabbit With Bad Luck!! :MAX: on Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:10 am

and-dude


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yeah go on!

i know i havent been on dis AMAZING FORUM for a while but this story is making me send lots of posts!!

so do another to chapters please drunken

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